Poetry is the revelation of a feeling that the poet believes to be interior and personal which the reader recognizes as his own. — Salvatore Quasimodo
In honor of April being Poetry Month, I decided to give poetry a try. I studied the pantoum, which is a simple, structured poem style based on ancient Malaysian folk poetry. A pantoum can be rhymed in abab pattern, or left unrhymed. Each stanza is made up of 4 lines, and there can be as many stanzas as you want.
There is a pattern of line repetition that gives this type of poem a lovely, flowing quality when done right. The pattern is that the second and fourth lines of a stanza are used as the first and third lines of the next stanza. The final stanza uses the first and third lines of the very first stanza as its second and fourth lines. That brings everything full circle by the ending line matching the beginning one.
Are you confused yet? Someone please correct me if I have this wrong, but my understanding is that it goes like this (with the change in the last one being the pattern for your final stanza):
1 2 3 4, 2 5 4 6, 5 7 6 8, 7 3 8 1
This has been a fun project, but my poems really stink. Here’s one of my best:
The Drought
The land lies cracked and barren
Beneath the scorching sun
Not a drop of rain has fallen
Since the summer first begun
Beneath the scorching sun
Crops have felt the strain
Since the summer first begun
Now desert instead of plain
Crops have felt the strain
Not a drop of rain has fallen
Now desert instead of plain
The land lies cracked and barren
My challenge to you is to write a pantoum. Post it in the comments here, or put it on your own blog and post a link in my comments section so I can read it. It can be any length, and doesn’t have to rhyme; just don’t make it vulgar, please.
On May 1, I will mention each person, if any, who joined me in writing a pantoum, and will include a brief comment highlighting their blog or website. Yeah, I know it’s a cheap prize, but it’s the best I can do.
Here’s a link to the site that got me interested in pantoums, which has better examples to go by for writing one of your own:
http://www.geocities.com/Wellesley/2401/chapbook/pantoums.htm
There’s one about the desert that’s worth reading even if you don’t plan to write one:
http://www.geocities.com/Wellesley/2401/chapbook/dawning.htm
I hope you’ll join me in celebrating what’s left of National Poetry Month.
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