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		<title>Comment on Book Reviews by Carol Benedict</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carol Benedict]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Apr 2013 21:10:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi, Jane. Many of the books I&#039;ve reviewed were given to me free of charge in exchange for providing an honest review. This arrangement allows me to read books I wouldn&#039;t normally purchase, so I don&#039;t mind not getting paid. Since I don&#039;t get paid, however, I limit the books I review to those I truly think I will enjoy.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Jane. Many of the books I&#8217;ve reviewed were given to me free of charge in exchange for providing an honest review. This arrangement allows me to read books I wouldn&#8217;t normally purchase, so I don&#8217;t mind not getting paid. Since I don&#8217;t get paid, however, I limit the books I review to those I truly think I will enjoy.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Book Reviews by Jane</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/book-reviews/#comment-5134</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Jane]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Apr 2013 20:17:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why don&#039;t they pay you? Do you try to sell your reviews to magazines or newspapers? It seems like they should/could pay you for your work.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why don&#8217;t they pay you? Do you try to sell your reviews to magazines or newspapers? It seems like they should/could pay you for your work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 5 Novel Annoyances by Carol Benedict</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2013/02/06/5-novel-annoyances/#comment-5102</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carol Benedict]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Apr 2013 02:31:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi, Wylee. I don&#039;t mind a series, but I like the characters to achieve the story goal in each section. The Hobbit ended without them accomplishing what they set out to do, so there was no resolution. To fit the whole story into a regular-length film would require leaving out a lot of the action, so I understand why they did it this way--I just would rather not have to wait months to find out what happens next!

Thanks for taking time to comment!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Wylee. I don&#8217;t mind a series, but I like the characters to achieve the story goal in each section. The Hobbit ended without them accomplishing what they set out to do, so there was no resolution. To fit the whole story into a regular-length film would require leaving out a lot of the action, so I understand why they did it this way&#8211;I just would rather not have to wait months to find out what happens next!</p>
<p>Thanks for taking time to comment!</p>
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		<title>Comment on 5 Novel Annoyances by Wylee</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2013/02/06/5-novel-annoyances/#comment-5101</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Wylee]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Apr 2013 00:23:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I liked your post as well, and I agree with you.
But did you not know The Hobbit is only part one of a 3 part series?
there was no ending because you&#039;re only 1/3 through the story!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked your post as well, and I agree with you.<br />
But did you not know The Hobbit is only part one of a 3 part series?<br />
there was no ending because you&#8217;re only 1/3 through the story!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Story Elements: Setting and the Sense of Taste by Carol Benedict</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2013/02/27/story-elements-setting-and-the-sense-of-taste/#comment-5021</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carol Benedict]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Mar 2013 22:50:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you, Laura. 

There are several foods that trigger memories for me--some good, some unpleasant. Despite that, I still overlook the sense of taste in my writing, too.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Laura. </p>
<p>There are several foods that trigger memories for me&#8211;some good, some unpleasant. Despite that, I still overlook the sense of taste in my writing, too.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What Does It Mean: Upmarket Fiction? by Carol Benedict</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2009/12/11/what-does-it-mean-upmarket-fiction/#comment-5020</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carol Benedict]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Mar 2013 22:45:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Glin, congratulations on finishing your book! Hope you find a market for it. :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Glin, congratulations on finishing your book! Hope you find a market for it. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Story Elements: Setting and the Sense of Taste by Laura Best</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2013/02/27/story-elements-setting-and-the-sense-of-taste/#comment-5018</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Laura Best]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Mar 2013 00:05:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This is a lovely post, Carol, and a wonderful tribute to your mother. What lovely memories. :)

Your post really made me start thinking. I&#039;m not sure if I&#039;ve ever written about tastes. I have written scenes where people are eating but so far as describing the food I don&#039;t think I&#039;ve ever done that either. Interesting, since food plays an important role in our lives on so many different levels. I love that you&#039;ve pointed out the emotional side to food and how it can trigger memories..]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a lovely post, Carol, and a wonderful tribute to your mother. What lovely memories. <img src='http://s0.wp.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Your post really made me start thinking. I&#8217;m not sure if I&#8217;ve ever written about tastes. I have written scenes where people are eating but so far as describing the food I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve ever done that either. Interesting, since food plays an important role in our lives on so many different levels. I love that you&#8217;ve pointed out the emotional side to food and how it can trigger memories..</p>
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		<title>Comment on What Does It Mean: Upmarket Fiction? by Glin</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2009/12/11/what-does-it-mean-upmarket-fiction/#comment-5017</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Glin]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Mar 2013 10:23:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I have just completed writing a book and reading through the writers&#039; yearbook, I had no idea what market I had written for, as after 50,000 words, my brain was addled. Thanks for information - I think I&#039;m a &#039;straddled&#039;. Glin]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have just completed writing a book and reading through the writers&#8217; yearbook, I had no idea what market I had written for, as after 50,000 words, my brain was addled. Thanks for information &#8211; I think I&#8217;m a &#8216;straddled&#8217;. Glin</p>
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		<title>Comment on Formatting a Novel Manuscript by Mollie Cardwell</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2009/09/18/formatting-a-novel-manuscript/#comment-4982</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Mollie Cardwell]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Mar 2013 12:03:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thank you, Carol. I looked at Rachel&#039;s website. It is encouraging. They want larger manuscripts than I have written, mine is 60k+, but they offered tons of info about the entire process, very helpful. Thanks to you too, Jon. I had heard but forgotten about browsing the bookstores.
Thanks again!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Carol. I looked at Rachel&#8217;s website. It is encouraging. They want larger manuscripts than I have written, mine is 60k+, but they offered tons of info about the entire process, very helpful. Thanks to you too, Jon. I had heard but forgotten about browsing the bookstores.<br />
Thanks again!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Story Elements: Setting and the Sense of Taste by Carol Benedict</title>
		<link>http://thewritingplace.wordpress.com/2013/02/27/story-elements-setting-and-the-sense-of-taste/#comment-4980</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Carol Benedict]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Feb 2013 21:57:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Rilla, I agree. It&#039;s amazing how our senses and our emotions work in harmony. You make a good point about taking some things for granted, and it&#039;s interesting that those things aren&#039;t the same for each of us. In my case, hearing is probably what I focus on most. 

Bacon seems to be gaining in popularity again. Someone mentioned that Burger King has a bacon sundae, which doesn&#039;t sound good to me at all. I&#039;ll stick to green beans!

Thanks for taking time to share your thoughts.
~ Carol]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rilla, I agree. It&#8217;s amazing how our senses and our emotions work in harmony. You make a good point about taking some things for granted, and it&#8217;s interesting that those things aren&#8217;t the same for each of us. In my case, hearing is probably what I focus on most. </p>
<p>Bacon seems to be gaining in popularity again. Someone mentioned that Burger King has a bacon sundae, which doesn&#8217;t sound good to me at all. I&#8217;ll stick to green beans!</p>
<p>Thanks for taking time to share your thoughts.<br />
~ Carol</p>
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